Saturday, April 4, 2009

9a: Writing Thesis Statements

1. The Ku Klux Klan amassed an enormous following in Colorado, and it was able to exert a profound influence in state politics, business, and religion.

2. The reform that the Klan promised gave it the platform it needed to establish a foundation in Colorado, and once it became entrenched, it had only to infiltrate the political realm.

3. Insomuch as it held great sway in state politics, business, and religion, the Ku Klux Klan was the most influential institutition in Colorado during the 1920s.

1 comment:

  1. These are all very good thesis. I thought that the second one seemed to flow better then the other two though.

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